Time to start this..
Since this is mostly just the introduction part, there isn't a lot to say. The Rabbit Joint song was a good choice, though I've heard it in quite a few places so this being the only time you used it (so far at least) was a good call. Also lol at everyone who thinks it's system of a down.. kind of understandable since the internets has accredited them with the song nearly everywhere, but would not kill them to do a little googlin' before saying they know better than the freaking author him/herself.
However this proved to be an effective start to the series that made me want to check out the other entries. Also I notice you give a solid effort to reply to every review you get, which is pretty admirable. Good to know you care enough about your work to do so. (yeah, really off topic, but I got plenty of space to type here, so whatever. ) Voted 5.