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Nice

You have extreme potential as an animator. I'm not going to load this review with alot of BS like "SUCKED!! QUIT ANIMATING!! GOD!" ... It's alot more helpful to give constructive criticizm, as the master reviewer of Newgrounds. Now, here is some of the key points of your animation:

-Blood. It was quite realistic, somewhat -too- realistic. Combined with your somewhat "fictional" style of animating, it just doesn't fit.

-Acceleration/Deceleration. Such as bieng tossed into the air and falling back... it was very realistic.. which actually fits a little with your FBS animation.

Now, some of the things to improve on.

-Blood. Make it dangle in the air and fall slowly, a little less realistic.. maybe a lighter shade of red.. and make it fly out farther before dissapearing, maybe let it dissapate slowly.

-Actually being able to see "Invisiman".
The fact that you couldn't even see the animation of the invisible person downgraded my rating to a "3". You might have been able to make his animation a movie clip and set the "Alpha" of it to 30-40..

.... I hope this review helped you somewhat, thanks for reading my opinion. Show your thanks by responding. =รพ...

Jared_Thacker (Watch my suckass stick cartoons!... YAY!)

DaKiller responds:

Thanks man, these kind of reviews really help!

Great fuckin movie mahn

lol the plain and short thing: The fact that you made something with SUCH a stupid plot made it good! (Take that in a good way) (To last reviewer: That was pico. ) You should really do the voice for pico in the pico 2 if they had voices lol. Satan is the funniest, but the dog and his sex crazed ways kicks it up a notch. Satan is a real pussy lol. My favorite quote:
"Cat: SHIT! Dog: FUCK! Donkey: POTATERS?" But uhm.. you got something goin. And RAB 4 is fucking sweet too. Look for my review on itz!
~J4r3d

That was fucking HILARIOUS!

Dude!! That was the best VG Parody I have EVER seen!This Shit is better than VGDC! You are the SHIT!

Great!

Hell Yeah!!

It sucked

Dude, if it took you 5 weeks to make that shit, you shouldn't be on the great NG.

If your 10 you shouldn't be on NG.

It doesn't go well does it?

Im 12 but I can judge and this shit sucks.

Good!

Wow, you are showing some promise in animation. Let me know if you release something else.

PIMP!

THIS WAS FUCKING AWESOME AND FUNNY AS HELL. Sorry... if you want to see something funny, watch it.

Hello

This is funny as hell. Please keep kicking my ass with this shit. (As in good)

It was alright.

THE STORY SUCKS. Clean off the slate and get something better. Even plotless movies are better. Now for the animation, you have alot of talent towards animation. Just keep trying until you find a GOOD story/plot. Right now your movie is gay. Getting there though!

SOUL WEEFER

Awesome! Nice usage of sprites, and damn was that funny. The play button was hilarious. And the "Shoot Her Quick!" was a classic, too.

Check my Web link up there (DeviantART), my contact info's at the top of the page..

Age 33, Male

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Duncan, Oklahoma

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